Tuesday, 9 September 2008

Unpredictable

The sail,

cruising on smoothly

the waves rough but

the winds; a complement

the stars, beacon;

the guides at night.


The dock within sight.



Then wham,

it hit something

its majestic sail wavers

the winds cease

the stars, beacon flicker



while the dock remains at sight

it grows fainter

the complacency

a fallacy.

4 comments:

Jian said...

OI! don't sound so emo laa T_T kenapa ini... hahaha no la its ur blog, u have the right to write watever you want. but still, anything just sms me or gimme a call ok? my turn to be pelampung! though a replacement of who i dunno la. Da Wei maybe =p

Mei Shan Low said...

HHAHAHA OMG. OMG. PLEASEEEEE!!!

public jian public.

hhahaha but yeah, it's because something went wrong with my stuff at the last minute.. and I really don't like mending things last minute. hahaha sigh what to do?

but anyway thanks, ur not a pelampung k. ur the real thing hahaaha i don't have a bobdog. lol

Jian said...

Lol its a joke la~ don't take it seriously hehehe sorry tho :p

u don't need a bobdog. all you need is an adjacent =p

HAHA

now happy lor semua sudah siap xD

Mei Shan Low said...

nah la.. just jk. It's not real.

hahah, anyway, i know you're very happy with adjacent. hopefully, my intuition is right for u!